The most important feedback I received on my first elevator pitch was regarding my tone of voice. Multiple people were impressed with the idea and how it was presented, but noted that that I sounded monotone when delivering the pitch. This time I tried to emphasize my points and spoke louder to sound more confident.
Friday, October 25, 2019
Elevator Pitch No. 2
The most important feedback I received on my first elevator pitch was regarding my tone of voice. Multiple people were impressed with the idea and how it was presented, but noted that that I sounded monotone when delivering the pitch. This time I tried to emphasize my points and spoke louder to sound more confident.
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Hello James,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job on improving your pitch. Over all you gave a great delivery of your idea and made it clear. I'm sure this system will be incorporated into some sporting arenas in the future. The American people are becoming lazier and more willing to pay for convenice of food.