The most important feedback I received on my elevator pitch was regarding my tone of voice. Multiple people were impressed with the idea and how it was presented, but noted that that I sounded monotone when delivering the pitch. This time I tried to emphasize my points and spoke louder to sound more confident. I also tried to look up at all times.
Hey James, I think your elevator pitch was great. You delivered your idea very well and regarding your tone, it did not seem monotone at all. I think you sounded very confident and knew exactly which points you wanted to hit to make a successful elevator pitch. Overall, I think you have a great idea and it could be very successful in the future.
Hey James,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was great. You delivered your idea very well and regarding your tone, it did not seem monotone at all. I think you sounded very confident and knew exactly which points you wanted to hit to make a successful elevator pitch. Overall, I think you have a great idea and it could be very successful in the future.